Please advise me

[80ins]

Hi every one.
I'm an amateur.
Here is my first song with the Fusion, I need your opinion.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=T61h5x9zz-k
All I use is the Fusion's ROM preset and internal effect, I used a computer just for transmit MIDI file and record the audio out, no mastering at all.
Please tell me what to do for the better song.
Thanks for reading.

[drummond]

I'll check it out in my studio tomorrow. I already listened in my laptop and in that it sounds really good. It sounds a bit quantized, so maybe you could play the parts and don't use quantize, to have more of a human feel to it. The same goest for dynamics. It could use a little bit more of velocity dynamics in the main lines and percussion also. I enjoyed the sound selection. Good job!

[80ins]

Thank you !
Did you mean a "perfect quantized" song (which play exactly the same as an music sheet) will have less realistic?
And about "dynamic", should I random change the note velocity in the whole song? (I'm an amateur, but love to cover song, I don't know exactly what is dynamic).

[drummond]

when I say quantized is because it sounds like you used the quantize funcion, the tempo doesn't fluctuate a little bit, so it is a bit too tight in timing, could be a bit looser. The interpretation part is missing a bit although the notes are right. Feeling. You can play or program dynamics to make it sound more natural also. It sounds a bit like played by a robot instead of played by humans.

[80ins]

Thanks !
A new experience for me.
Now I noted that my source midi file is hardly quantized. And I did not change the note velocity.