See

[deweak]

deweak.free.fr/mp3/TMP_See.mp3

Here is a work in progress. I wrote this song in 2002 but it needed a serious refreshing to match my actual style :-)

I still have to record some parts and to mix it better, but the main idea is here.

Instruments used :
- strings and brass : East West Orchestra Silver
- drums : Superior Drummer
- e-drum loop : Electribe EMX-1
- guitars : AX-Synth (rythm, solo) and Fusion (backing)
- bass, "belly pad" : Fusion
- pad : V-Synth GT

I planned to record some guitar parts, but I'm definitly a poor guitarist and my attemps didn't sound as good as synthetic guitars...

[rainbow]

I like this demo ... the overall structure of the song and vocal is fine and the orchestral and lead guitar parts work well especially the end lead guitar part but I agree the rhythm guitar part could maybe be worked on. The tone of the rhythm guitar part is a bit'fizzy' ... maybe you could try an arpeggiated chorus guitar with a bit of delay or still using the grunge guitar sound maybe 'beef' it up a bit ... more Spocks Beard (Alan Morse) ... either way without overlaying the orchestral part too much. It's just my opinion ... keep 'em coming.

Best regards ... Rainbow:)

[deweak]

Thanks for the advices and for listening. I'll work on this song soon, for the moment I'm thinking about the other one's lyrics...