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Post by deweak on Nov 2, 2007 16:49:44 GMT
I'm waiting for lyrics but the melody is ready. So, this is a pre demo. Feel free to give me any clue to make it better  deweak.free.fr/mp3/deweak_kaola_su.mp3Synth arpeggios (the one arriving at the first chorus and the other at the very end), the first strings in the second part and the electric guitar come from the Fusion. |
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Post by stuart on Nov 7, 2007 20:51:45 GMT
Deweak, your submissions just get better and better!
Love the simplicity of the main section.
It could benefit from something to keep it lifting through the second verse section rather than drop back down after the chorus.
The short orchestral break/middle 8 is inspired.
Is that a real drummer of EZ Drummer? It sounds very real and the over sound is great and the mixture of semi rim shots makes it a nice groove. I would calm it down a little depending on how the vocal works over it, and drop it s little further back in the mix. Bringing in those snare fills less often would make them more dramatic and special.
As with all pop songs you win or lose on the melody, but you have a great sounding platform there already.
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Post by deweak on Nov 8, 2007 17:31:24 GMT
This is EZDrummer  When the vocal track is recorded, I'll adapt the drums to make them lighter. For the moment I tried not to make a too linear programming. |
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